雅思作文真题范文2021 第1篇
Introduction
A conundrum of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, such as corpulence, which can be partly ascribed to people’s preference for unhealthy foods despite the fact that they know the detriments. Personally, behind such preference are two predominant factors, and this thorny issue can hopefully be tackled.
解析
说明文题型,问原因和解决办法。该话题与12月2日刚考过的话题相似:Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 这题干不就是一种解决办法嘛?另外,剑16 Test 3 以及 6月17日考题,都是与健康饮食相关的题。
Ø conundrum n. 难题
Ø corpulence n. 肥胖,臃肿
Ø be ascribed to 被归因于
Ø detriment n. 坏处
Reasons
To commence, the sound flavour that junk food offers should be responsible for the unhealthy diet. This is mainly because those unhealthy foods are usually sugar-, salt-, or fat-laden ones high in calorie and GI, which, after being eaten, will stimulate nerve cells to produces dopamine, a chemical functioning as a neurotransmitter to convey bliss and excitement. For this reason, people prefer or even easily get addicted to sugary beverages and fatty foods, especially the ones whose mouthfeel has been enhanced./ Besides, it is due to the surging living pressure that most employees nowadays have to work non-stop. In this case, they tend to order these instant foods, usually unhealthy ones, which fit the current fast-paced life.
解析
原因1:好吃;原因2:压力大 → 快节奏的生活→ 一些不健康的食品,比如快餐,比较适合这种趋势
Ø laden adj. 满载的,装满的(lade的过去分词)
Ø dopamine n. 多巴胺
Ø function as v. 起…作用
Ø neurotransmitter n. 神经递质
Ø mouthfeel n. 口感
Solutions
Considering the gravity of this trend, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first approach is that policies regarding subsidisation can be issued by governments to motivate manufacturers to develop diet and delicious products. Meanwhile, the subsidies can also to some extent reduce the production costs, which will guarantee the newly-developed products sold with a proper price. Besides, high tax could be imposed on unhealthy food products. In this way, producers will thus have to raise the price for the sake of ensuring their profits, which naturally follows that ordinary people are more likely to consume the aforementioned cheaper but healthy alternatives.
解析
整体方案就是调控价格:1. 用补贴鼓励公司研发健康美味的产品,同时降低新研发产品的售卖价格;2. 提高不健康食品的税收 → 售卖价格提高 → 人们选择买前面更便宜且健康的食品
Ø diet adj. 低脂肪的,低糖的
Ø impose vt. 征收
Conclusion
To recapitulate, since possible culprits and feasible remedies have been enumerated, this crisis can be promisingly resolved with joint efforts of relevant parties.
解析
重申观点
Ø recapitulate v. 总结
Ø culprit n. 罪犯;(不好事情的)原因
Ø remedy n. 治疗方案;解决办法
Ø promisingly adv. 有希望地
Ø joint efforts 通力合作
雅思作文真题范文2021 第2篇
1、 主要论述online education带来的好处或者坏处。好处和坏处的论述都不难,好处主要就是方便,时间灵活,有录制方便复习或者可以获得更多的资源。坏处就是缺少互动和监管,效率比较低。但是如果只是论述好处和坏处那就妥妥的跑题了。(题目中出现了Since的因果关系,所以论述完好处或者坏处之后要扣回到题目说schools还有没有存在的必要,这个很重要❗️)
2、坏处写到online education对视力不好,对同学关系不好,这些观点都不是高分观点。(这个不是题目的核心讨论问题)
雅思作文真题范文2021 第3篇
Introduction
When health problems of the public are turning into a social concern, many deem that individuals, as a member of the community, should maintain their health in terms of fulfilling one of their social obligations instead of reaping their own benefits. From my perspective, I tend to think otherwise.
解析:注意题干中的rather than(而不是),意味着这个观点是认为“take care of their health”只是“a duty to the society”。我们站其对立面时,可以是认为保持健康“只”和个人相关,也可站在“与个人和社会均有关”。曾有类似题目问的是“个人保持健康应该是个人负责还是政府负责”,要区分这两个问题的差异。
Concession & Refutation
Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to perform their social duty by leading a healthy life. This is mainly because as a member of society, one throughout his or her entire life usually enjoys the social welfare, especially in health care, such as footing part of the medical bills, offering free vaccinations, and investing in medical research for the sake of bettering people’s well-being. In return, it naturally follows that citizens should assume their responsibility to repay the community by at least not putting extra burden on the corridors of power. In other words, citizens should facilitate the reduction of financial cost in medical field, and thus stay healthy to this end. However, this is an incomplete part of the whole picture, which indicates that individuals should adopt healthy habits not only for social duties but also for their personal benefits.
解析:以社会公民的身份享受社会带来福利的同时,人们也应该有责任回报社会,起码不要给社会的医疗系统增加额外负担。但是,这不是事件的全貌,意味着人们同时也得从个人利益出发。
Argument
As a matter of fact, aiming at reaping one’s own benefits is more likely to enable him or her to secure a sound physique. Such is human nature that people usually have every reason to negotiate the impediments and fulfil the goal for their own sake, with a sense of social responsibility being too abstract to serve as the motivation. A typical example is what happened in China at the beginning of 2020 when the nightmarish pandemic – COVID-19 – impacted. Why did most Chinese citizens conform to a series of policies issued by the government and stay at home for months during the lockdown? The answer may be the social obligation of helping alleviate the tension, but a more real response to this question is human’s innate fear of suffering from the torture of diseases, physically and mentally.
解析:人的本性使然,当出于个人利益,更可能完成保持健康这件事,最终达到个人和社会都获益的共赢结果。回想2020年初,为什么大多数国人会乖乖接受封城隔离等一系列措施?是社会责任感,也更是对病痛乃至死亡的恐惧。
Conclusion
To sum up, it is much easier for citizens to stay healthy for the purpose of deriving their own benefits, which further secures a win-win result for both individuals and the society.
解析:一句话总结
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