雅思剑10惩罚孩子范文 第1篇
惩罚的必要性及可行的体罚方式
In this essay,I will explore the necessity of punishment for children in learning right and wrong and the various means of punishment which may be employed to meet this end.
To begin,it is perhaps prudent to point out that standards of right and wrong are almost entirely arbitrary and may differ wildly from culture to example,a child urinating or defecating on the street is frowned upon in most western countries,but seemingly tolerated,it not encouraged,in con extend this argument to encompass even such apparently inviolable taboos as murder or rape when considering societies such as Afghanistan or Papua New Guinea(where revenge killings form a strong backbone of tribal networks)or South Africa(where“corrective rape”is a widely accepted remedy to homosexuality in females).Also,it is worth pointing out that the very concept of punishing a child is considered“wrong”in certain progressive circles in the west,making the thesis somewhat ironic.
Regardless,punishments of various forms can,have and will almost certainly continue to play a major role in forming a child’s conception of the world and the rules by which a society must argue that punishment is an effective way of learning rules itself,fairly child does something wrong,is punished cither through physical means or the denial of something valuable to the child(a favourite toy,the right to watch television,free time etc)and through repeated lessons the child learns,like Pavlov’s dogs,that performing the unwanted act will almost certainly result in a predictable outcome-discomfort in this question asks whether this is necessary,and I would argue that it is not.
The method outlined above is an example of negative reinforcement and conceptualises the child as a kind of learning machine,one which must be fed stimuli in order to make sense of the external effect,it negates the child’s own abilities to self-reflect and empathise with Jean Piaget has demonstrated,children can,if provided with enough guidance from a suitably patient adult,come to understand the consequences of their actions from a purely theoretical viewpoint-to put themselves in someone else’s shoes-and thus internalise the reason why their actions are wrong rather than viewing it as something they want to will be punished for.
As for the punishments parents and teachers should be allowed to use,the answer depends upon the culture,the teacher,the parent,the child and the social norm being circumstance will be different,and will call for a different approach-as such,the question asked without context is essentially would state that for a child persistently using a smartphone to post inane statements on Wechat during class,waterboarding would be an acceptable punishment.
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在这篇文章中，我将阐述惩罚对于孩子明辨是非的重要性，以及为实现这一目的而采取的多种惩罚方式。
首先，也许需要慎重指出的是，判断对错的标准几乎完全是主观且随意的，它会因文化的不同而存在很大差异。例如，在大多数西方国家，孩子在街上大小便会受到指责;但在中国这似乎可以忍受，尽管不被鼓励。同样，也可以将该论点扩展到一些显然神圣不可侵犯的禁忌当中，例如像阿富汗或巴布亚新几内亚或南非发生的谋杀或强奸案——在巴布亚新几内亚，复仇杀戮形成了部落间联盟的强大支撑;而在南非，“矫正性强奸”被普遍认为能够治疗女_者。而且，值得指出的是，惩罚孩子这一概念本身在西方特定的进步人士看来即为“错误”，这使得此篇议论文多少有些讽刺意味。
无论如何，多种形式的惩罚能够、已经并且将来肯定还会继续发挥主要作用，从而塑造孩子的世界观，形成社会必须遵守的法则。想要论证“惩罚是学习法则的有效方式”，从其自身来说，非常直观。孩子犯了错误，就会受到体罚或者无法得到一些重要的东西(如最喜爱的玩具、看电视或自由玩耍的权利等)，并通过反复教育使其吸取教训。正如巴甫洛夫的狗一样，做出不当的行为肯定会引发一定的可以预见的后果，且这种结果往往并不美好。然而，对于这类惩罚是否必要这个问题，我的答案是否定的。
上文描述的方式是负强化的一个例证，它把孩子当成一种学习机器——孩子必须接受刺激才能理解外部世界。结果，这否定了孩子的自省能力及理解他人的能力。正如Jean Piaget所说，如果一个足够耐心的成年人能提供充分的指导，那么孩子便能从纯理论的视角理解自身的行为后果——设身处地地为他人着想——从而把自身行为之所以是“错误”的原因内化吸收，而不是把它当成自己想做，却会因此受罚的事。
至于家长和老师能采用什么样的惩罚方式，答案取决于文化、老师、家长、儿童以及正在被打破的社会准则。境况不同，采取的方式也会不同。因此，不设情景的提问是毫无意义的。但是，我想说，对于一个一直在课堂上使用智能手机发送无聊微信的学生，“水刑”是可行的惩罚方式。
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雅思剑10惩罚孩子范文 第2篇
1. 文章全面回答了题目中的问题。第一段改写题目，指出学习对错的重要性，同时表明自己不同意题目中所给观点的立场；第二段给出不同意惩罚的原因；第三段说明不应该用什么样的惩罚；最后一段再说哪种惩罚方式比价有效。
2. 文章对各个论点进行了论证。第二段通过说明惩罚太小孩子没有效果，而孩子年纪大之后又有更好的其他方式来反驳题目观点。第三段指出哪怕惩罚有必要，也不应该采用体罚的方式，它会给孩子带来不好的影响。最后一段给出比较好的惩罚方式，并说明它们具体好在哪里。
需要注意的是，这篇文章并没有我们习惯的结尾段。可以见在这种报告类题目的写作中（需要提供解决方案），结尾并不是必须的。
雅思剑10惩罚孩子范文 第3篇
文章用词十分灵活，涉及范围也很广。具体内容可以参考下面“高分词汇短语”板块。
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
1. 作为雅思官方给出的范文，这篇文章肯定不存在任何语法错误。
conscience n. 良知，良心。
parenting n. 养育，扶养，教养。
conviction n. 坚信。
have a role to play in … 在某事中有作用
infant n. 婴儿。
harsh adj. 严厉的。
entail v. 涉及，牵涉。
provide good role modeling 树立良好的榜样
sanction n. 惩罚。
discipline v. 管教。