2018北京高考作文范文 第1篇
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. 'The day starts at dawn on my farm,' he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly tow
ards the mountains. 'Don’t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
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【满分范文】
Paragraph 1
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
Paragraph 2
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!
2018北京高考作文范文 第2篇
请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【满分范文一】
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
【满分范文二】
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
2018北京高考作文范文 第3篇
根据本题的题目,应谈新时代的青年在祖国的发展中成长,考生不仅要对新时代、新青年有明确的认识,还要有更广阔的视野和更为博大的情怀,同时熟悉祖国的发展历程。此外,还要明确成长的意义,不仅是身体上的成长,还有思想上、认识上的成长。通过高考试题来立德树人,教育考生、引导考生思考自己的成长与祖国发展的关联,体现了命题组引导考生关注现实生活的意图。
试卷上所呈现的考题分为三个部分,分别为提示语、题目和文体要求、写作要求。这三部分密不可分、互为补充。考题的提示语部分共有两句话,第一句“今天,众多2000年出生的同学走进高考考场”,设置了一个真实的情境,一下子就拉近了考试与考生的距离;第二句“18年过去了,祖国在不断发展,大家也成长为青年”提示祖国在发展,大家与祖国同步成长。提示语给试题做了一个导引,设置了一个宏大的背景:祖国发展,青年成长。
第二部分明确了题目和文体要求。题目为“新时代新青年——谈在祖国发展中成长”,要求写议论文。在题目中,副标题对主标题做了限制,“谈在祖国发展中成长”界定了写作的具体范围,考生不能够随意泛谈。经过分析组合,所写的内容可以细化为:谈新青年在祖国发展中成长,谈新青年在新时代中成长,谈在祖国发展中成长为新青年。
考生在审题过程中一定要仔细研读题目。题目中的主标题和副标题可以互为条件。祖国发展既可以是新青年成长的条件和环境,新青年成长也可以是祖国发展的前提或者助力。考生既可单向写,也可双向写。通过“成长”和“发展”等词语可以看出,题目中含有比较性思维,如将过去、现在、未来加以比较,能够更好地写出具体的成长和发展过程。
第三部分对于写作的要求凸显了文体特征,强调观点、论据和论证这三个方面,对于议论文的教学有着明确的引导。
审题误区
1.审题失误,缺乏关联。题目明确要求写“新时代新青年——谈在祖国发展中成长”,新时代新青年与祖国发展,二者都需要有。如果文中只有新青年的成长,而没有放在新时代中,没有放到祖国的发展中,举例并没有建立“新青年”与“祖国发展”双方的合理联系,例子不能论证所要阐释的问题,就应该视为审题不到位。阅卷中发现,部分考生在审题时忽略了这个关联,写作时没有紧扣二者,影响了整体得分。
2.分析肤浅,表述模糊。主要表现为观点不能充分表达考生的认识,对关键词的内涵或新时代与新青年的关系有一定的分析,但分析缺乏深度。文章中只有新时代或新青年成长,与祖国的成长二者间没有关联起来,只在开篇、结尾提到文题,内容与题目没有实际关联;或者对“新”的把握不够准确,对“祖国发展”“青年成长”的特征表述得比较模糊。
综合起来看,既有认识的问题,又有思维的问题。认识要深刻全面,思维要有力度,这是议论文的较高要求,但是考生往往顾此失彼,不能够很好地进行关联。由此可见,考生不仅要积累素材,还要对其加以深入的分析,在平时要多进行一些时事评论之类的小专题训练。教师要能够对一个热点问题进行深入的引导性的分析。只有让学生养成以读书和生活为基础,深入思考的习惯,才能够在试卷中呈现更高的认识水平和思辨能力。
(1)今天,众多2000年出生的同学走进高考考场。18年过去了,祖国在不断发展,大家也成长为青年。
请以“新时代新青年——谈在祖国发展中成长”为题,写一篇议论文。
要求:观点明确,论据恰当充实,论证合理。
(2)生态文明建设关乎中华民族的永续发展,优美生态环境是每一个中国人的期盼。
请你展开想象,以“绿水青山图”为题,写一篇记叙文,形象生动地展现出人与自然和谐相处的美好图景。
要求:立意积极向上,叙事符合逻辑;时间、地点、人物、叙事人称自定;有细节,有描写。
2018北京高考作文范文 第4篇
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1. 短片内容:学校的发展;
2. 放映时间、地点;
3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student UnionJune
2018北京高考作文范文 第5篇
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:
1. 词数100左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018北京高考作文范文 第6篇
我不知道,我在什么样的环境中成长,但我知道,自己应该是一个有理想,有担当,有责任心的人。
小的时候,我就一直认为当一名老师就是天大的梦想。后来在老师的教导下,我慢慢地发现自己不再是幼稚的孩子,不再是顽皮的孩子,不再是一个不懂事的孩子。我知道,当一名老师并不是那么容易的,当一位教师并不是一件十分困难的事。
小的时候,老师们对我很关心,我知道老师们是一位好老师,他们把自己的青春和爱都给了我们。老师们是一群无私奉献的蜡烛,燃烧自己,照亮别人。老师的言行对我产生了深深的影响。老师们在黑板上写字,批改作业,备课,写下自己的心声,传授我们知识,让我们在知识的海洋中畅游。
现在回想起,我当时真是羞愧难当,真是不应该。我应该向那些为我的梦想而奋斗的老师学习,在学习上,我要努力,奋斗,再奋斗,再努力!
我的演讲完毕,谢谢大家!
2018北京高考作文范文 第7篇
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
【满分范文】
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.
In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.
At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.
2018北京高考作文范文 第8篇
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考词汇】
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers’ interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children’s palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points as well as double our achievements.
If you are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
2018北京高考作文范文 第9篇
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
1. 口语能力:
2. 相关经验;
3. 应聘目的。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
2018北京高考作文范文 第10篇
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐他上哪所大学;
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018北京高考作文范文 第11篇
北京高考作文1
在一个阳光明媚天气里,我和小伙伴在街上玩耍。忽然,天空中出现了一条“龙”,一条“大龙”飞到一片沙漠,突然,“龙”的眼睛变成了一片树叶,一阵阵风吹来,沙漠变成了一片绿洲。我和小伙伴们就在沙漠中玩耍起来,一直玩到大家都玩腻了,我们才依依不舍离开这片沙漠。
我们玩了好一会儿。忽然,有一位叔叔说:“这里有一个小伙子,你们想去干吗?”
我想了好一会儿:“我们在这里玩吧。”于是,我们就和那位叔叔一起去那片沙漠。
我们来到沙漠,那位叔叔说:“这里真大啊!”我说:“这里有一片树林,你们在这里做什么啊?”叔叔说:“我们在这片树林里做了两件好事,一件事是把沙尘暴吹走了;一件事是把沙尘暴吹走了,这片地方就变成了大树林了。
我说:“你们去干什么啊?”叔叔说:“我们在沙漠里做了两件好事。一件事是把沙尘暴吹走了,另一件事是把这里变成大树林了。”
我们说完话,叔叔就走了,我和小伙伴们就在沙漠里玩了。
我们走了一会,看见了一条“龙”,我说:“龙。”龙说:“这是什么龙啊?”
“这是龙的龙,这是龙的龙,这是龙的龙,这是龙的龙。”我们走了一会儿,就看见了一条龙,龙说:“这是龙的龙,这就是龙的龙。”
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